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The Past

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The three sat together, hours after Charlie's life was saved
They watched the stars and thought about the trials they had endured...

And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are
And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are


The oldest scars-
The freshest wounds-
The mismatched trio drank away their troubles on that hill.

And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are
And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are


Jared drowned away the years of pain
The loss of his best friend, Kenny
The loss of his only son, Kenny

That night on the hill his pain finally left him,
And he could have sworn he saw his son among the countless stars

And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are
And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are


Clyde got drunk that night.
He stared at the pendant of his perfect mother.
For the longest time, he refused to admit it, but it was true.

It took a couple of bottles, but he could finally admit it.
He never met his father, and his "perfect" mother didn't exist.

And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are
And objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are


And Charlie... He took so long to work up the courage to do that,
Only for it to be ruined at the last second.

Was it his fault?
After years of cowardice, he was going to confess-
And he ran her over on the way to her house.

She used her body just like a bandage, she used my body just like a wound
I'll probably never know where she disappeared


Whether the pain was old or new,
The three sat and dwelt on the past.
Together they mended their wounds,
And moved on into the future.

But I can see her rising up out of the back seat now
Thus concludes this four part songfic based on Meat Loaf's "Objects In The Rearview Mirror May Appear Closer Than They Are".

We all lie to ourselves in one form or another, don't we?

Honestly, this one was a bit more forced than the others, simply because there was a lot less material to work with. That's partly why it was late. That and I was going to write something else, but I'm working on a couple of things right now, and well, time is not my friend.

That aside, lemme know what you think!

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Jerad, Clyde, Charlie (c) ~qinop
"Objects In The Rearview Mirror May Appear Closer Than They Are" (c) Meat Loaf/ Jim Steinman (I still dunno which)
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blackyuna's avatar
okay... i didn't expect that ending, not that I have an ending in my mind but I really didn't expect that.

I kind of researched on the "i dunno which" you keep mentioning, I didn't figure it out either. And I read it's Jim not John...